"Return Of The Lonewolf"
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"Return Of The Lonewolf"
[dis is ma 1st rhyminn poem-ish fingi i've eva writtn.
it mi8 nt b dat dope, but no harm tryinn sumfing new, innit?!!]
" The divine spirit of a Lonewolf, howls out, loud, the true sensation
Eyes filled with emotion, dry tears ripped under da numb temptation
Unbroken silent questions, is it adaptation? woz there an option?
Misapprehension of our lost nation, is on rotation, of its revolution
Grinding out sins through a demon kiss, 2 peal off his skin, woz it justified?
Right or wrng? Wotz fact, he neva denied, his pride neva freeze-dried
Blindfolded facts, reacted demonised, fates unchangeable, yet he defied
Fate conquered, warrior lost wars, but his spirit survived, yet 2 b crucified
Life? Givn as a gift, Soul? Now a rift, Luv? Will b shared with one wife
ONE love, ONE lyf! Lyf is armed strife, which tells lies, through fife
Cautious of a calamitous defeated spirit, stated hanging 2 foll on a knife
Here is a lil story, behind tearless eyes, which realized da facts of lyf
oll da joys been sacrificed, woshed off in darkness, been shaded
Neva stayed in illusion, woznt blind 2 c, 2 c, oll da colours got faded
He stood&stands alone, doesnt need 2 b knwn, fate takes him ahead
MC SLiCK aka The iCON's words been marked, been comprehended "
cheers, 1
it mi8 nt b dat dope, but no harm tryinn sumfing new, innit?!!]
" The divine spirit of a Lonewolf, howls out, loud, the true sensation
Eyes filled with emotion, dry tears ripped under da numb temptation
Unbroken silent questions, is it adaptation? woz there an option?
Misapprehension of our lost nation, is on rotation, of its revolution
Grinding out sins through a demon kiss, 2 peal off his skin, woz it justified?
Right or wrng? Wotz fact, he neva denied, his pride neva freeze-dried
Blindfolded facts, reacted demonised, fates unchangeable, yet he defied
Fate conquered, warrior lost wars, but his spirit survived, yet 2 b crucified
Life? Givn as a gift, Soul? Now a rift, Luv? Will b shared with one wife
ONE love, ONE lyf! Lyf is armed strife, which tells lies, through fife
Cautious of a calamitous defeated spirit, stated hanging 2 foll on a knife
Here is a lil story, behind tearless eyes, which realized da facts of lyf
oll da joys been sacrificed, woshed off in darkness, been shaded
Neva stayed in illusion, woznt blind 2 c, 2 c, oll da colours got faded
He stood&stands alone, doesnt need 2 b knwn, fate takes him ahead
MC SLiCK aka The iCON's words been marked, been comprehended "
cheers, 1
MC SLiCK aka The iCON- Mainstreamer
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Re: "Return Of The Lonewolf"
ABababababa.............gr8 man...heads up to ya...keep up da gud thing...u sure do got skillz....
>X-PLiCT<- Hiphop Enthusiast
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Re: "Return Of The Lonewolf"
fankz XT, ED & GT. um glad u lads lykd it.
... thought u ppl wud find it borinn...
GT is 20 yrs, hez old enouf 2 knw wotz itz lyk 2 b alone n fi8 bak!!!
otha r still young, yet did lyk it. so um surprized. lol.
nevertheless, i appreciate fo u feedbak(s).
= )
bless u oll, 1
... thought u ppl wud find it borinn...
GT is 20 yrs, hez old enouf 2 knw wotz itz lyk 2 b alone n fi8 bak!!!
otha r still young, yet did lyk it. so um surprized. lol.
nevertheless, i appreciate fo u feedbak(s).
= )
bless u oll, 1
MC SLiCK aka The iCON- Mainstreamer
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Re: "Return Of The Lonewolf"
aaa..bro honestly...
YOUR GIFTED
YOUR GIFTED
Sharjil- Moderator
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Re: "Return Of The Lonewolf"
Ya man.....keep it up...
>X-PLiCT<- Hiphop Enthusiast
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MC SLiCK aka The iCON- Mainstreamer
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Age : 37
Location : SLiCK's dMd aka Dhanmondi
Registration date : 2008-09-24
>X-PLiCT<- Hiphop Enthusiast
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Re: "Return Of The Lonewolf"
finally XT decided 2 spit da truth. n hez emoticon sayz, "PLZ DONN WRiTE NO MO"!!!
lol. honest comments r appreciated!!!
cheers, 1
lol. honest comments r appreciated!!!
cheers, 1
MC SLiCK aka The iCON- Mainstreamer
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Re: "Return Of The Lonewolf"
Haha........u got me mayne...hey Slick...listen up can ya tell me abt a specific thread ....where to post ma lyrics up...so ya'll stars can check it out...
>X-PLiCT<- Hiphop Enthusiast
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Re: "Return Of The Lonewolf"
well... 1st fing 1st, um nt a star. um betta off as an undergrnd emcee.
n 2nd fingi, um nt diz site's Mod, so it wnt b appropriate me tellinn u where 2 post ur lyricz.
but fo da meantym, post 'em under "Poetry" thrd. ask ES abt it. olri8, kid?!?
tc
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n 2nd fingi, um nt diz site's Mod, so it wnt b appropriate me tellinn u where 2 post ur lyricz.
but fo da meantym, post 'em under "Poetry" thrd. ask ES abt it. olri8, kid?!?
tc
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MC SLiCK aka The iCON- Mainstreamer
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Re: "Return Of The Lonewolf"
Hey thankx man...really appreciated.........
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Re: "Return Of The Lonewolf"
na worries. b kool!!!
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MC SLiCK aka The iCON- Mainstreamer
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